BIPM final review: presentational errors to be fixed

[ronaldtse]

BIPM final review: presentational errors to be fixed

[manuelfuenmayor]

1 | 8 | first line of ToC | Superscript for the "e" = 9e
2 | 10 | header | Superscript for the "e" = 9e

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5 | 11 | list of annexes | missing vertical spaces between the four list items
41 | 120 |   | missing vertical spaces between the four list items

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6 | 11 | note | note not aligned on right side; insert a vertical space between the two paragraphs
42 | 120 |   | note not aligned on right side; insert a vertical space between the two paragraphs

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8 | 11 | Note | Add a space before and after the colon "NOTE : La…", general rule for the French text: insert a space before the colon

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10 | 15 | Table 1 | increase width of 1. column to have less line breaks in the names of constants, also applies to several other tables

This issue was fixed already.

11 | 18 | last equation | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4), also in other equations
23 | 53 | CIPM 1956, text after "décide" | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4), also in other equations
24 | 54 | CGPM Resolution 9, text after "ratifie" | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4), also in other equations
43 | 127 | last equation | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4)
44 | 128 | second equation | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4)
46 | 128 | last equation | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4)
48 | 130 | last equation | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4)
55 | 161 | first line | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4), also in other equations
56 | 162 | first line after "ratifies" | last group should have four decimals to avoid single decimal (see paragraph 5.4.4), also in other equations

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12 | 20 | second last paragraph on kelvin | The hyperlink should be to the French page:                                            https://www.bipm.org/fr/committees/ci/cipm/78-1989/resolution-5                                 general rule: In the French text, hyperlinks to recommendations or resolutions should go to the French versions, not the English; en to be replaced by fr in the weblink

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17 | 38 | 5.4.6, second paragraph | Remove the space before the full stop at the end

The additional space is added by the X math symbol.

18 | 47 | 3rd CGPM | "CGPM Résolution 1" should be replaced by "Résolution 1 de la CGPM" This is the case for all occurrences in Appendix 1 (CGPM Résolution xx = Résolution xx de la CGPM). Idem for CIPM Resolutions
20 | 48 | last side note | replace "CGPM Réunion 9" by   "9e réunion de la CGPM", use this scheme consistenty, also for CIPM meetings
26 | 59 | Resolution 3, text following "considérant" | "CIPM Réunion 51" should be replaced by "51e réunion du CIPM"

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19 | 47 | "sanctionne" | enumeration 1., 2., 3. replaced by a), b), c); in the English text, the numbers are maintained, use numbers also in French

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28 | 61 | Note | add a space before the ":"
29 | 63 | Note | add a space before the ":"

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36 | 80 | side note (1) | The place of this side note follows the general scheme to anchor all side notes at the beginning of the section. In this case, the use of the reference is two pages later. Is there a simple way to bring the note closer to this place?

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45 | 128 |   | There seems to be hidden text (delta(nu)) in white colour, visible in front of the "T" of the word "Draft" in the background. The same exists on many other pages.

I don't see the issue in this part. No action taken on this request.

49 | 140 | footnote (d) | Add hyperlinks to Metrologia citations.Reference should be "16th CGPM (1979, Resolution 6)

Have published a question about this request in #199.

54 | 150 | ToC, CIPM 2001 | Opening double quotes
57 | 169 | last line | Closing double quotes

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All other issues are fixed by markup in #200.

[ronaldtse]

Closing this since the rest has been made individual tickets:

• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#195
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#197
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#198
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#199
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#200
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#201
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#202
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#203
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#204
• metanorma/metanorma-bipm#205