zimkies/drunk

An app that forces you to do something good for yourself everytime you have a drink

drunk's Issues

Feedback from Challen

Awesome! Love it, Bean! Some initial feedback:

• When I get to the part where I enter my phone number and it references “my guardians” I was a little confused about what “my guardians” actually were. Maybe introduce the concept of “guardians” in the intro? (and maybe use just the singular “guardian” since that’s how the product is introduced?)
• Trevor is the best to help with this bc he’s the resident grammarian, but just make sure that your colons (e.g. “…for my vice:”) are consistent
• A little confusing that the first page is in the first person and the following page is in the second person
• And on the second page it was a little unclear that I was selecting someone to hold me accountable. Maybe a little more clarity on what a guardian is and how you should go about selecting someone (e.g. “Who’s your most reliable friend? Invite them to be your guardian!”)
• Also, since some people will probably be a little hesitant to give up their friend’s contact info (for fear of spamming, etc.), maybe be extra direct about how much/when they’ll be contacted (e.g. “We will ONLY contact..”
• I navigated away from the page, but I think you reference the guardian as both a “champion” and a “guardian.” For consistency, maybe just use “guardian”?
• I like the FAQ page a lot, but I’d maybe add short, simple directions to the vice counter page so that users know the basics without having to click through to the FAQs

cdog [5:13 PM]
Oh, also, I don’t think it explains the “Virtues” anywhere, that would be super helpful to know how to use those